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Rated: 13+ · User Poll · Young Adult · #2237501
This is only a story idea. Been needing some feedback. Please vote on the poll.
Poll Question:
About an orphan girl named Lottie. She's been diagnosed with schizophrenia because she has too-real hallucinations about monsters. One night, she's on the roof of the orphanage she's lived in for a year with her best friend, Grace Cunnings. Grace admits to being a lesbian and liking Lottie, but Lottie doesn't feel the same way, and then a flying monster attacks them and Grace ends up falling off of the roof. Lottie is accused of murdering Grace, but since there is no legitimate evidence, she doesn't get arrested - only sanctioned by the court to live in a recluse home for troubled children named Grapes. Grapes is run by two wardens - Miss One and Miss Five. She meets the aloof dyslexic Jules, strikes up animosity with Factitious disordered Priya and Kleptomaniac Meredith, and starts up a friendship with Pyromaniac Sam. Then that same night, Lottie is awoken by a music box tinkering. She sees Sam getting out of bed in a sleepwalking state, so she follows her out the door. In the hallway all the children are awake and look similar to Sam's condition. They file out of the dorms and enter through a large off-limits black door. It takes them to a forest. Lottie watches Ms. One and Ms. Five murder Sam and put her blood into a statue of a horned creature, and then is chased by the children, but Jules saves her. The next day, she wakes up to realize all evidence of Sam gone - as if she'd never existed. She sets out to find the truth of what really happened.
Poll Options:
      A good Idea
      A bad idea
      Needs work
      Could be improved
      Meh
      Would read.
      WILL NEVER EVEN GIVE A SECOND GLANCE!
      lacks individuality
      could become a NYC bestseller
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