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Short Stories: October 26, 2005 Issue [#680]

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3. Letter from the Editor
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About This Newsletter

Welcome to this week's edition of the Short Story newsletter. Each edition of the newsletter highlights issues of concern to short story writers.

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Letter from the editor

Using Your Nose


I read a novel last weekend and the description drew me into the tale immediately. I couldn't figure out why the descriptions in the novel stuck with me more than usual until I skimmed the pages out of context. I noticed the author used scent in many of the descriptive passages. It's funny how a scent can bring back a memory. When I smell pine, I'm drawn back to my childhood. I'm sitting in the living room admiring the Christmas tree my father is attempting to fit into the stand. I can smell the pine and sap from the freshly cut tree and it brings a smile to my face.

Looking through my own tales, I realized I rarely use odors to describe a scene. Smells can bring a scene to life for a reader, but it's an often overlooked descriptive tool. Writers focus on drawing a mental picture for the reader by describing what they see in the scene. By incorporating the scents in the room, they can not only draw the picture, but give it life. Consider the following passage:

After stretching, Franklin hopped to his feet and wiggled his ears. The burrow was empty. His mother must have taken his brothers and sisters out into the field. Franklin hopped toward the entrance, eager to taste the sweet greens.

The field appeared empty but if he looked closely, Franklin could see the tall field grasses twitching. The leaves on the trees were still; the twitching wasn’t the result of the wind. Franklin knew where to find his family, and after looking around for predators, he hopped to the corner of the field.

The description is adequate, but it doesn' t really give the reader a full picture of the setting. Animals use scent to identify danger, so adding a note about Franklin sniffing the wind for predators would be appropriate in this passage. First, I'd have to decide how a predator would smell. Since my cat is a predator for rabbits, I could describe the musky scent of his coat. Of course, he's a domestic cat so I'd have to take a little license with the description. Deciding upon and adding some information about the smell of danger would round out the scene.

Look through your stories and see if you can add another level to your descriptions by incorporating scent.

Until Next Time,
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*Note1* schipperke "I think I will try the idea of creating a character first, and design a story around the character for the upcoming NaNoWriMo in November. Thank you for an excellent newsletter."

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