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Mystery Trivia of the Week: While most readers will likely recognize Eric Van Lustbader's name as the one that Robert Ludlum's estate chose to continue the Jason Bourne series of espionage mysteries after Ludlum passed away, Lustbader is a rather prolific author on his own, having published - in addition to eight Bourne novels - more than 32 novels in five different series over the past 35 years. If you include the eight Bourne novels and spread them out evenly across his career, he's averaged a book a year since 1977!
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ALPHABET SOUP
My last newsletter about the differences between police, state police, and sheriffs received great feedback, so I decided to extend the series into two more newsletters: this one dealing with federal agencies, and the next one dealing with branches of the military. While the law enforcement within a state is often determined my geographic jurisdiction, since federal agencies have authority over the entire county, their jurisdictions are often determined by the matters they oversee. So while the DEA and CDC both have jurisdiction in the same town, one of them deals with drugs-related matters while the other deals with disease control. I think there's a tendency in mystery fiction to rely a little too heavily on either the familiar law enforcement agencies (FBI), or the familiar clandestine services branches (CIA), when there are, in fact, dozens of agencies out there with specialties that could give your characters the ability to still run around and solve mysteries, but with a little more nuance and originality.
Some agencies worth considering in the mystery genre:
ATF: Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms, and Explosives. Investigates federal crimes that involve the manufacture or sale of firearms or explosives, acts of arson or bombings, and illegal trafficking of alcohol and tobacco products.
Bureau of Consular Affairs. Issues passports and responsible for the following matters in consulates, embassies and other territories around the world: deaths, arrests, robberies, adoption, citizenship, and travel.
CBP: Customs and Border Protection. Responsible for regulating and facilitating international trade, enforcing U.S. regulations, customs, and immigration. Includes the Border Patrol.
CDC: Center for Disease Control & Protection. Protects public health through the prevention of disease, illness, and disability. Particularly focused on the issues of infectious disease, food-born pathogens, and environmental hazards.
CIA: Central Intelligence Agency. Gathers information about foreign governments, corporations, and individuals, analyzes that information, and carries out covert activities overseas.
CS&C: Office of Cybersecurity and Communications. Responsible for the security and reliability of the nation's cyber and communications infrastructure (websites, online banking, etc.).
DEA: Drug Enforcement Administration. Combats drug smuggling and drug use. Also responsible for pursuing drug investigations outside the United States.
DSS: Diplomatic Security Service. Responsible for threat protection around the world, including both U.S. officials abroad and foreign officials visiting the United States.
DSS: Defense Security Service. In charge of security personnel investigations, industrial security, and security education, awareness, and training.
FAA: Federal Aviation Administration. Regulates and oversees all aspects of civilian air travel.
FDA: Food and Drug Administration. Protects and promotes public health through the regulation of food, tobacco products, dietary supplements, pharmaceuticals, vaccines, medical devices, cosmetics, etc.
FEMA: Federal Emergency Management Agency. Coordinates national response to disasters that occur in the United States and overwhelm local authorities.
FBI: Federal Bureau of Investigation. Investigates federal criminal activity, counterintelligence within the United States, and has jurisdiction over Native American reservations inside the U.S.
ICE: Immigration and Customs Enforcement. Responsible for identifying and removing vulnerabilities to the country's border, economic, and transportation infrastructure, as well as responsible for removing those illegally staying in the country.
NPS: National Park Service. Responsible for managing all U.S. national parks, as well as many important monuments.
NSA: National Security Agency. Manages worldwide monitoring, collection, decoding, translation, and analysis of information, including surveillance. Responsible for the security of the United States' information and communications.
TSA: Transportation Security Administration. Responsible for the security of the traveling public, including the Federal Air Marshal Service.
USMS: United States Marshals Service. Responsible for fugitive retrieval, prisoner transport, court security, and serving arrest warrants.
USSS: United States Secret Service. In addition to protecting national leaders (both present and past), also responsible for investigating financial crimes including counterfeiting and othre major fraud.
Some non-U.S. agencies:
FSB: Federal Security Service of the Russian Federation. Successor to the KGB. The principal security agency of the Russian Federation, responsible for counterintelligence, internal security, counterterrorism, surveillance, and the investigation of serious crimes. Also a military service, like a combination of the United States' FBI, CIA, and Armed Forces all rolled into one.
INTERPOL: International Criminal Police Organization. Intergovernmental organization that facilitates international police cooperation. Intended to be as neutral as possible, so typically does not intervene or take action in connection with military, political, religious, or racial matters, although it does focus on - among other things - public safety, terrorism, organized crime, genocide, war crimes, piracy, art theft and trafficking, smuggling, human trafficking, money laundering, and white-collar crime.
Ministry of State Security. China's main security agency, responsible for counterintelligence, foreign intelligence, and political security. Also has the authority to act as regular police and arrest or detain people for crimes involving state security.
Mossad: Israel's national intelligence agency, responsible for intelligence collection, covert operations, and counterterrorism. Oversees The Kidon, an elite group of assassins.
SIS: Secret Intelligence Services. The U.K.'s intelligence agency, also known as MI6. Supplies foreign intelligence to the British government. While the "MI" (short for Military Intelligence) sections used to number nearly twenty, there are only two remaining: MI5 which deals with counterintelligence, and MI6, which acts as a liaison between SIS and Foreign Office.
As you can see from the above list (which is by no means comprehensive), there are a variety of agencies that deal with different areas of concern. Rather than writing another FBI or CIA agent character, consider whether there's a more interesting agency and set of responsibilities that your character can bring to the table. For one-off stories, perhaps your character works for the CDC and is tasked with investigating a mysterious outbreak. Or maybe your character works for the Diplomatic Security Service and has to keep his visiting foreign official alive. Or, then again, maybe your character works for FEMA and gets drawn into a larger mystery plot while on the ground investigating a disaster. Similarly, if you're writing a series of stories, an agency like the ATF or INTERPOL is widespread and deals with dozens of different kinds of issues, providing you with plenty of storylines without the same old set of FBI or CIA initials on your character's badge.
With so many other mysteries out there, it can be helpful to come up with a fresh take on the "law enforcement" or "spy" character archetype. Consider some of the organizations listed above (or even some of the ones that aren't listed) and explore all the different options your characters have and mysteries they could be tasked with investigating.
Until next time,
-- Jeff
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I encourage you to check out the following mystery items:
Ever since her first day of college, Nao Akiyama had considered it a personal goal to start every morning with a smile. An angelic goal to say the least, but also one that was often difficult to pull off. On the days when she'd awaken to the sunlight gently warming her skin, or the pleasant sound of birds chirping outside her window, a smile was well within reach. Unfortunately, those days were few and far between.
"So, where are we off to today, Lars?" Ral sat at the table across from his half eaten breakfast. The purple robes of his office were as bright and shiny as ever. He took great pride in his position. Crossing the room I reached down to adjust my sword belt and greaves.
"The market to start, then I have my watch later in the day. And you?" I reached for a piece of bread on Ral's plate; he swiped at my hand but missed. "Getting slow, old man." I laughed. Ral smiled.
"King Alean requested my council at a trade summit. I fear being the true power behind the throne means my work is never done." He sighed, a playful sigh. What he said was true. Under the former King he was but one of many advisors, under Alean he was the only one. "I hear that the King is considering appointing a new Guard Captain."
"Is that so?" My interest was piqued. Since my father's betrayal there had not been a Captain named.
It was harvest year of 1021. Fall atmosphere enveloped the countryside’s and parklands of Vaclia. Leaves of all shapes and hues traveled with the wind and blanketed the hardening ground. The midday air was cool and accompanied by gentle gales. The evenings that arrived as the sun prepared for slumber were chilling and bitter by nightfall. The forests of Vaclia appeared as a chromatic motley oil painting that embellished a dismal white sky. Sounds of clattering armor buckles and the galloping patter of iron hooves upon hard packed dirt toured their way up a wintry wooded path.
My husband and I had decided to go on vacation for a couple of days since work had been rough lately for the both of us. We weren't sure where we were going. Rob figured it would be a good idea to let the road take us to wherever it pleased us. The sun was going daark, but we weren't sure exactly where we were. While driving to find a place, Rob and I had debated whether or not to try and find a hotel or just find a motel on the main road to stay for the night. Even though Rob worked for the Police Department, he never really liked driving late at night.
“Get in”
Jacob just stared, dumbfounded.
“Nah uh,” the man said, flashing a gun where only Jacob could see it. He noticed Jacob glance over his shoulder to the security guard at the door of the hospital. “Don’t try anything stupid.”
“Who the hell are you, and why are driving my car?” Jacob asked through the window in barely more than an alarmed whisper.
“I’ll tell you later.” The man said. He aimed the gun at Jacob’s face. “Get in.”
Blind. Like when you wake up in the middle of the night and can't see a thing. The room was virtually pitch black, all except for a small candle illuminating one small corner of what I assumed to be a large, fairly empty room. With the light of the small flame, I could just barely see the outline of a large, rusted chair. The room had no clock, but as I moved closer toward the light, I could see that my watch read 5:30 am. I knew that soon someone in my home would wake up and realize that I'm missing, and then call the police to search for me. I wasn't sure who would be interested in kidnapping me. I was a small time artist struggling to get some sort of luck in New York. The fact that someone was interested enough to go through the trouble of kidnapping me was baffling. |
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Feedback from my last newsletter about police, state police, and sheriffs:
Mara ♣ McBain writes, "Thanks for the lowdown on law enforcement! This was and interesting topic I've never seen covered and could be useful in so many stories! "
Thank you! And yeah, I've always thought that the different jurisdictions could be a useful bit of information whether you just need to know who shows up at the crime scene, or if you want to create a whole new set of circumstances for your mystery!
Quick-Quill writes, "Thank you for including my story Jumper in this newsletter. I found this one on Official duty is a keeper. I have an outline for a thriller and this information is pretty critical to the validity of my story. It has a big hole in the middle because I don't know much about police procedure in a terrorist situation and of course no one will talk about it... This sure gives me a reference to go to. So I'm saving this newsletter. Thanks."
You're very welcome!
DB Cooper writes, "A long time ago Florida had the poorest paid troopers in the nation."
It's sad how little we pay some of the people who do the most dangerous jobs.
Creeper Of The Realm writes, "Great newsletter, Jeff! Living in the city for so long, I learned who resides where, and then moving to the county, we had a sheriff patrol the neighborhood. I'd love to hear your take on the subject of FBI and CIA maybe. I love stories about spies, but I'm not familiar as to how to incorporate them into the story. Maybe that could be your next subject when you write the next Mystery NL? ~ Gaby"
Ask and ye shall receive.
BIG BAD WOLF is Howling writes, "Of course, sometimes the law is a little tricky, especially if you're a cop who comes from a long line of thieves." (Submitted item: "White Sheep of the Family" )
Interesting premise!
Tornado Dodger writes, "This is a really great topic Jeff. I have actually wondered some of the same questions you answered and had to research the answers myself. This would have been really handy! Great job (as usual) "
Great minds think alike!
mmcclemore writes, "This is a great newsletter, very informative. I was wondering where detectives come from. I think they come from the ranks of the State Police or Sheriffs. Also, State Police have SWAT and other special forces. This newsletter could go onto become a novella of information if you introduced Federal law enforcement as well, and even law enforcement within correction facilities; corrections officers, CERT's, the Warden. Also, don't forget Internal Affairs- the law enforcement that keeps law enforcement in check.
You really have something here, but is just a scratch on the surface. Thanks."
Thanks for writing in! Yes, I'm afraid I've only scratched the surface of all the different law enforcement and regulatory agencies out there... even with this one and one more planned newsletter in the series, I still doubt I'll be able to cover even a sliver of everything that's out there!
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