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Christmas Adventures
I bet you’ve all had a Christmas Adventure of one kind or another sometime during your life. Stuff happens, even at Christmas time.
To me, Christmas is a lot like going on a Family Vacation: There’s never any ‘rest stops’ (it’s always hurry-hurry-hurry, rush-rush-rush), and instead of the kids driving you crazy with, Are we there, yet? Are we there, yet? Are we there, yet?” it’s replaced with, “This is it? This is all I get?”
Aww, Christmas....
Where’s Santa when you really need him, huh?
But still, Christmas always has its dollop of creamy hi-jinx and mayhem. As a kid, I was no saint, but I’ve learned to believe that sometimes the Good Lord watches over us all.
Here’s what happened.
"Joey And Me"
It was the day after Christmas and fresh snow covered the ground like the inside of Mom’s old freezer.
Joey and I could hardly wait to get out our new toboggans.
"Out of my way, small-fry," I yelled, pushing him behind me as I ran for the front door.
"Mom.... Billy's pushing me again!"
I forced myself to stop, and then held the door open for him as he struggled not to bang his new sled into the wall.
"Hurry up, would ya?" I teased.
We pulled our small toboggans to the corner of Pine and Fir Street, and then looked up at the highest, steepest hill in town.
It was early morning and there was no traffic. The sun glittered off the snow like radioactive fallout. Blinded, we trudged up the hill.
“Come on, slowpoke,” I yelled. “I’ll race you to the top.”
It was the start of a perfect day for sledding.
"Oh, yeah?" Joey challenged.
“Yeah!” I yelled back.
“All right, then," he said. "On your mark!”
"Get set!" I screamed.
"Go!" we hollered together.
I let Joey have a head start. I grinned as he took off running, giving it everything he had through the soft deep snow. He ran like a waddling goose with rubber boots on. Poor kid, he’d do anything to beat me just once.
However, I thought, it was not going to be today.
I took a deep breath and smelled the fresh crisp air, and then took off after him.
I passed him laughing and even gave him a stiff straight-arm knocking him to the snow. He yelled something, but I didn’t stop to listen.
The cold air burned in my chest with each heavy breath, but I kept pumping my legs like a machine until I finally reached the top.
Exhausted, I plopped down in the snow alongside the road and waited for Joey. He was only about half way up the hill and still struggling. I heard him huffing-and-puffing and watched as his little legs kept slipping with every step he took.
Joey always tried to do everything I did, but at seven-years-old, it was just impossible for him to keep up. I couldn’t tell him that though, because it would hurt his feelings and he’d probably wanna clobber me. That’s one thing I can say for him, he wasn't afraid of anything.
“Throw me the rope to your toboggan, Joe,” I said climbing down to meet him, “and I’ll pull you up.”
He tried his best to throw the rope, but both his feet slipped out from under him and he hit the ground hard again. I heard him groan with the impact. The fight was gone out of him as he slowly started sliding down the hill on his belly.
I climbed down a bit more and snagged the rope. “Grab hold,” I yelled. “I’ll haul you to the top.”
He barely managed to latch onto the back of the toboggan with his gloved hand. I yanked the rope and dragged him the rest of the way up.
We both took a short breather. “Nice going, doofus,” I laughed. “I bet'cha can’t beat me going down the hill either.”
“I could beat you anytime I want, Billy,” he said, angry, and out of breath. “Just because you’re eleven doesn’t mean you’re faster.”
“All right, all right,” I said, throwing a little snow into his face. “I was just teasing you anyway.”
He stood up and brushed the snow from the front of his clothes.
“What do you think?” I asked him, looking down the hill and studying the bumps and dips—trying to figure the smoothest route to take.
“Geez, I don’t know…it looks awfully far down,” he said. “Do you think it’s safe?”
“Safe? We ride down this hill on our bikes all the time,” I said. “What’s the difference? ‘Cept now it’s just covered with ice and snow.” I poked him in the arm. “You’re not turning chicken, are ya?”
“No!” he said stubbornly. “If you can do it, so can I!”
“Look,” I said, “if you stay close to the side of the road, all you’ll have to do is jump off into the snow bank if you get scared. Piece of cake!”
“Are you going to stay close to the side?” he asked.
“Heck, no,” I said. “I’m going right smack down the middle of the road as fast as I can.”
“Me, too,” he said boldly. “Just like you, Billy, right down the middle.”
I smiled. “Really? Right down the middle, huh? Well, we’ll see about that.”
I prepared my toboggan for takeoff. I lined it up perfectly in the middle of the street, and then climbed on. Joey copied my every move like a shadow.
“Are you ready?” I asked him.
He nodded, bravely, but I could tell by his eyes that he was scared. I could already picture him smashing into the snow bank before he got halfway down.
“All right, then. On your mark!” I yelled, and I could hear the rustling of our winter clothes as we moved into position for takeoff.
“Get set!” shouted Joey.
The intensity and excitement heightened as we sat upon our shiny new chariots.
“Go!”
We pushed off, screaming the last word together.
We started out side-by-side, flying down the hill like two Olympic stars. Our smiles were frozen to our faces, and the cold wind slapped us so hard that tears welled up in the corners of our eyes.
Being so low to the ground, it felt like I was moving a lot faster than I actually was. I imagined I was already traveling at unknown speeds down some Olympic toboggan course.
I tried leaning a little to the left, and the toboggan went left, obeying my slightest command. It crossed my mind then, that Joey didn’t know how to steer a toboggan. We hadn’t talked about it before, and our sleds were brand new.
Just then, a large truck and trailer pulled out into the intersection at the bottom of the hill—Wal-Mart boldly printed across its side. A choking fear gripped me. I immediately turned my toboggan toward the snow bank at the side of the road, crashing in a white cloud of snowy dust.
Quickly, I jumped up to see if Joey had turned off as well, but what I saw made my heart drop into my boots.
There was Joey, jetting down the middle of the road—ice and snow kicking up behind him like a snowplow. He was heading straight for the semi-truck, and screaming all the way.
“Oh, God, he can’t stop.”
The truck moved on through the intersection, totally unaware of the small child barreling down the hill.
“Jump!” I yelled. “Joey, jump!”
I started running down the hill after him, yelling at the top of my lungs.
“Stop! Joey! Jump!”
But he never heard a word I said.
He entered the intersection at top speed.
I can’t remember ever being so scared in all my life. I watched helplessly as he slid under the moving truck and trailer.
From that point on, everything was in slow motion.
I struggled to hurry down the hill, slipping and falling—yelling and screaming. All I could think about was my little brother and how much I loved him. How was I going to explain this to Mom and Dad? I pictured us all at the funeral, heads hanging down and crying. I felt something warm spread down the front of my pants and legs.
“God no, please, not Joey,” I kept saying as I ran. “Please, God!”
The truck drove on through the intersection without even slowing down. I could smell the diesel fuel. I stopped and waited for the rear end of the trailer to move out of the way.
“Joey, Joey!”
I was so scared.
As I entered the intersection, I saw his toboggan turned on its side in the middle of the road.
“Joey!”
“I beat you!” Joey said, standing up alongside the road with a triumphant look on his face. “I beat you—beat you good!”
I ran to him and crushed him in my arms—holding on to him for dear life.
“What’s the matter with you?” he asked, trying to push me away.
“I thought you were dead!” I yelled at him. “I saw you go under that truck, and—”
“Naw, I’m fine,” he laughed. “I slid underneath like it was a giant bridge. It was really cool! Can we do it again?”
He started back up the hill, then stopped and looked at me.
“You look scared out of your mind,” he said. “What’s the matter, chicken?”
Then he laughed so hard he fell down in the snow.
“Ha, ha,” I said, sarcastically. “What's so funny?”
“You wet yourself!” he said, pointing to the front of my pants. “You wet your pants!”
He couldn’t stop laughing.
Wordlessly, I turned and walked away, leaving him there. I walked over to get my toboggan, emotionally exhausted. I felt drained—washed out. I just wanted to go home.
Joey came running up alongside.
“Come on,” he said, “I’ll race you back to the house and you can change your pants.”
Throwing snow in my face, he took off running.
This was one more race he was going to win. I didn’t care anymore. I just felt so relieved to know that my little brother was still alive.
As I slowly trudged home, my wet pants began to chafe my legs. I had a feeling everybody in town was going to hear about it sooner or later.
Joey stopped and turned around, throwing another snowball at me. “Come on, slowpoke!” he yelled.
Until next year,
Merry Christmas!
billwilcox
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This story was awarded by a dear friend of mine that has passed on. Merry Christmas Ramblin Rose  and may God keep you snuggled warmly within His bosom.
Long
before
there are any
Christmas presents to
be found -- or hanging on
the door a festive wreath for you
to see; preceding any mouth-watering
foods or fancy decorations all around -- there
must at first come the Wondrous Christmas Tree.
Standing so majestically from the floor up to the roof.
Quite perfectly hand-picked and just as nearly childproof. The
smell is more than pine -- it’s more like fresh snow-covered woods.
Filled with anxious anticipation, the culmination of childhood. But if that’s not
quite enough -- strings of electric brilliance are wrapped ‘round and ‘round.
Ornaments and candy canes keep children exquisitely spellbound. And up upon the very top
an angel sits so daintily -- watching over
everyone and
the Wondrous
Christmas Tree.
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Once again you have put together an enjoyable and informative newsletter. You did a great job with the example because that chase, in real time, would have been just a couple of seconds. But you stretched it out by slowing down time, making it seem like it was going faster.
Nice trick that. 
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Okay, Bill, this is an absolute EXCEELLENT read. I love how you built up suspense, making us hang on to every word. the magic trick theory is just the coolest.
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This is a concept I knew about already, just from my experiences from reading, but I never really brought it to my attention before and it gives me a brand new perspective on how to make my action that much more packed. R.A. Salvatore I think is good at this, but I think another is great in a different medium; Akira Toriyama, with Dragon Ball series, bot the comic and the show. For example: There is one minute until a planet explodes, he stretches t is minute for three chapters or episodes, that is cramming a lot of action into that minute.
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