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Noticing Newbies: January 16, 2008 Issue [#2172]

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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
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About This Newsletter

Welcome to the Noticing Newbies Newsletter! Our goal is to showcase some of our newest Writing.Com Authors and their items. From poetry and stories to creative polls and interactives, we'll bring you a wide variety of items to enjoy. We will also feature "how to" advice and items that will help to jump start the creation process on Writing.com

We hope all members of the site will take the time to read, rate, review and welcome our new authors. By introducing ourselves, reviewing items and reaching out, we will not only make them feel at home within our community, we just might make new friends!


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Letter from the editor

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Write Your Novel One Line at a Time



*Bullet* An idea for a novel has been wandering through your mind for days, weeks, or even years, with no time to write it. Now that time is available, you're anxious to use it, right? The story has been gestating long enough and is ready. But when you try to write the first sentence your mind goes blank and you don't know where to start. Frustrated, you begin to think you're not destined to become a writer after all. Where did the ideas go?

*Bullet* Stop, back up, and start over. Most everyone has a story to tell, and it will demand to be written sooner or later, but only when it’s ready. Have you ever dealt with a stubborn child? Experienced writers have a difficult time forcing the story from their mind to their fingertips; new writers find it almost impossible because they haven't learned the importance of practice yet.

*Bullet* Remember, this is most important: no one gets it right in the first draft. My advice? Don't worry about it. Relax and let it happen naturally, one paragraph at a time. Literally, one paragraph at a time.

*Bullet* I suggest beginning with a scene. The 55 word, flash and short-short story contests are excellent practice for writing complete scenes. The hosts usually give you a prompt, but you can always continue it on your writing program to suit yourself. Prompts are wonderful boosters to get you started; sort of like a kick in the pants. Take advantage of them.

*Bullet* Then, write another. Before long you’ll have enough for a chapter. Don’t write in terms of chapter though, because you’ll worry about keeping the story in order. Write the end first if you want to. Write the battle from the middle of the story. Don’t be afraid to make changes; as the story evolves, you’ll discover new and better ideas. Chances are, you don’t carry a whole story in sequential order in your mind, and you have only vague ideas of the characters or theme. Maybe all you know for sure is the setting. Scenes are easier because they carry one idea at a time. If you work on that one idea enough, you'll learn how to bring it to life.

*Idea* Action first - Reaction second. Write a scene of action, follow with a scene of reaction.

*Bullet* Write each scene on separate pages and title them by topic - not by the page number or proposed book title. Keep them simple and clear so you know exactly which scene you’re about to open in your writing program. They're not ready to be posted and read by the public yet.

*Bullet* Instead of thinking in novel form, which is a huge undertaking; think of a scene. Keep it short and work on it until you can see and feel everything as a movie If this paragraph brings a new idea to you, great! Open a separate page and write it down for later. Finishing the first before changing topics helps develop the discipline you'll need to actually finish a complete story.

*Bullet* I realize this sounds like a haphazard way to write, but don't dismiss it too quickly. It's a bono-fide form of practice that can be used to learn how each element: emotion, sentence structure, settings, voice, etc, work together to bring a story to life. If the same character is used in each scene, it allows you to learn how to 'flesh out' your characters. Novels are conceived with a seed of an idea; they are not born fully developed and perfect.

*Idea* A pleasant bonus of perfecting a paragraph or scene is you may find yourself finishing a couple of exciting chapters. At this point, continue with the story before it runs off to hide again, and it will.

*Bullet* If the story is truly your child, you won't try to force it to come out. That never turns out well. You'll entice it through curiosity. Write a few paragraphs and listen. Write a few more. Don't worry, it's still there. Eventually it will be coaxed out, persuaded to take over and lead the way. When that happens, all you have to do is be there. Enjoy the journey.


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Keep in mind these are not finished pieces. They are all first drafts (at the time I read them) from talented new writers. I found the authors truthful when they asked for constructive feedback. The stories are good and I'm sure you'll enjoy them.

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The story of a sad, broken man making his last journey to wherever it may lead.
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It was like watching the perfection of a Japanese tea ceremony ...
by Jack Barnes Author Icon


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Its just a random story that I am just writing while I am bored during school. enjoy!
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A story in a medieval fantasy world. A world inhabited by demons, dragonfolk and humans.
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Submitted By: Darash Author Icon
Submitted Comment: I've started writing a novella and I want to know if I should continue. I don't get many readers however, so I thought it might be something for in the noticing newbie’s newsletter^^

Title: Tales of Khanos
Description: A story in a medieval fantasy world. A world inhabited by demons, dragonfolk and humans.

Kind regards,

Darash

Remember to read your neighbor’s work too!


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This is not a new member, but the Brief Description caught my eye and shows the frustration that all writers feel when writing those first lines tough line ; and it fits the theme of the newsletter. *Smile*

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Can you tell a story with only a few words? Hint Fiction requires a silver pen.
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48 Hour Short Story Contest Open in new Window. [18+]
48 hours to write a short story to a prompt. Enter to win great prizes.
by Leger~ Author Icon


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THE DROP-OFF BOX  Open in new Window. [13+]
Monthly newbie contest.
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Submitted By: Maria Mize Author Icon
Submitted Comment: Thanks for the excellent newsletter. Your choice of comparisons really gives a clear understanding of how we should receive criticism. Since writing is so "personal," criticisms can be hard to take. (...and sometimes it comes across as downright mean, though that probably wasn't the reviewer's intent.) If we don't learn as much as we can from it, our growth as a writer becomes stiffled and stagnate.

Submitted By: Joel Author Icon
Submitted Comment: Hi guys. Just writing to give a brief thanks for taking the time to publish these newsletters. I was surprised at how much I had actually taken in after reading it. Its motivational and thats a thing I need as much of as possible. You have done a great job of it, thanks again.

Submitted By: Tigger thinks of Prancer Author Icon
Submitted Comment: What a great topic for a newsletter, Esprit! So so many of us need this reminder. I think this analogy will stick. Even though I am not currently seeking publication (but plan to attempt at some point in the future), it is a good idea even when wanting on-site reviews.

Submitted By: BreenaRose Author Icon
Submitted Comment: I would like to say that I loved this article. My favorite part of any book has aways been how the authors show what's going on rather than tell. You know what I mean?

Submitted By: larryp
Submitted Comment: Esprit
I really enjoyed reading your newsletter. Some valuable information for writers seeking publication. Editors and agents see many manuscripts in any given day. Are there errors that you hope the buyer will choose to fix? Why would they do that when there are so many others available that don’t need work? Write with your heart, then prepare to sell by using your head.
~~good advice.
Larry



I appreciate you guys taking the time to offer feedback, thanks!

I love my job!

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