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"What is drama but life with the dull bits cut out."
-- Alfred Hitchcock
Trivia of the Week: While the most common classifications of narrative conflict break it down into three main types (man vs. man, man vs. nature, man vs. himself), there are also a variety of others, depending on who you ask. Other frequently-cited types of "man vs." conflicts include man vs. machine, man vs. society, man vs. fate, and man vs. the supernatural.
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CONFLICT
There are so many important elements of telling a good story: an interesting premise, compelling characters, good pacing, and other things like that. And almost all of them would be nothing, or at least drastically reduced by, a lack of conflict. Regardless of the kind of conflict is present, it's the most fundamental building block of a good narrative. Without conflict, your characters wouldn't be as compelling, your narrative wouldn't have any rising action, and setups wouldn't have effective payoffs.
In Greek literature, the central act of conflict in a tragedy was known as agon, and the easier it is for the protagonist to triumph over the agon, the less value there is to the drama. There are, of course, all kinds of conventions that build off that basic building block, such as the the idea that the antagonist must at first seem to overmatch the protagonist, or that the outcome of the agon can't be known in advance, or that the protagonist's struggle against the agon should be somehow be ennobling. But regardless of the specifics that you may or may not choose to follow, the fundamental concept that an easy conflict is an unsatisfying conflict is an important one to keep in mind.
A common mistake among many writers is making the conflict too easy for the protagonist to overcome. Two of the most frequent causes of that mistake are lack of adequate plotting (i.e., the writer just goes with the easiest/first idea for a conflict), and wanting to be too kind to your protagonist (i.e., the writer likes their protagonist and doesn't want to make them suffer too much). Both result in unsatisfying conflicts (and unsatisfying stories as a result) because the conflict doesn't truly challenge the protagonist.
When plotting out conflicts, consider at least one twist or reversal of fortune that allows you to continue to build the conflict in a new direction. Some screenwriting books call this the "midpoint twist" (or something similar) and highlight the fact that, in a story with a traditional three-act structure, somewhere near the middle of the story, something unexpected should happen that spins the story in an entirely new direction.
If your protagonist is trying to find a hidden treasure, maybe they realize the treasure isn't where they initially thought.
If your protagonist is solving a whodunit, maybe the person they assumed was guilty turns out to be innocent.
If your protagonist is trying to stop an alien invasion, maybe they learn something new about the aliens that shoots a hole right into the middle of the plan they currently have.
The more difficult and seemingly insurmountable you can make your conflict, the more satisfying it will be when the protagonist finally overcomes it. And while there are certainly many other elements that are important to telling a good story, they won't amount to much if the central conflict, the agon, of the story isn't sufficiently interesting and compelling.
Until next time,
Jeff
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