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 Echoes at My Funeral Open in new Window. [E]
A voice unheard, hidden behind smiles—until silence became its final cry.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Tulipo* Greetings, Shezi! I am reviewing this because your entry came up on "Read & Review". *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you and leave the rest.

*Tulipp* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I like that the ending surprised me. I didn't suspect that at all! Good job!
         *Bulletg* I felt this was well-written and thought-provoking.
         *Bulletp* Nice work.


*Tulipb* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I found no typos at all. The only thing you might consider is to add more space between the lines for easier screen reading. That's up to you though. Also, you might consider filling out the genre section. *Wink* Everything else looked great!

*Tulipy* Final Thoughts

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