Greetings, Hyperiongate! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Review Group, and also "The WDC Angel Army" , and a few others. I noticed you haven't been here for a few months. Hopefully, you'll be back soon!
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you and leave the rest.
The Positives/What I Liked
I couldn't help but notice the name Heisenberg right away! My hubby and I are binge-watching Breaking Bad currently (we're in the fourth season) and the main character--Walter White--is also known as Heisenberg in the drug world. So I looked up Heisenberg and discovered that in 1927, a physicist, Werner Heisenberg, proposed the Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle, which I found interesting! And I learned this all because of your Flash Fiction story! (and the fact that I'm watching Breaking Bad, which also made me curious about the name of your cat/dog. ) I love when that happens. I always feel a good book (or short story) that piques my interest enough to look up more information, is awesome. Good work! Your ending was great. I wasn't expecting that at all!
Suggestions/Comments to Consider
I have no suggestions. You've done a nice job with this. Your layout, too, is easy to read through.
Final Thoughts
Again, Happy WDC Anniversary! Hope to see you back in the community here, soon!
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