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Greetings, Sonali!

I'm here for I Write 2025.

Ahh... You've finally written something with a hint of darkness, of tongue-in-cheek smoke and mirrors. I was just thinking how positive and chipper your work always is. This strikes a different tone - or maybe it's me that's moody *Laugh*

This reminds me of a story I had as a kid in a book of "stories for five year olds," about a little boy who would respond "I don't care!" to everything. Until one day a lion walked in and swallowed him because he said "I don't care" to it... When he was rescued, he finally said "yes, indeed I care!" Sigh... When I was little I used to wonder what exactly that was all about. Nowadays I struggle with the "I don't care" syndrome myself. I guess you'd call it depression.

Anyway, so this poem struck a chord with me. I'm glad I came in after you once again. I can't think of anything to suggest for improvement. I'll say perhaps a dropnote to contain the details, but that's hardly necessary.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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