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Review #4809666
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Team Ahimsa Blog Relay, Various Contests Open in new Window. [18+]
Birthday Bash Relay. Excited on Second Place! Now for various WDC contests and activities
by THANKFUL SONALI is happy! Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Hook Of The Book -- "Fate"" Open in new Window.
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Review by Cubby Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Cupcakev* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY MONTH FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.*Cupcakev*


*Cupcakev* Greetings, THANKFUL SONALI is happy! ! I am reviewing this because your entry came previous to mine in "I Write in 2025" Open in new Window.. I am also part of the Anniversary Review Group, "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window., and a few others. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you and leave the rest.

*Cupcakev* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I think what I liked best, was that you referenced Shakespeare in your entry. What a perfect quote for the prompted picture! Nice work.
         *Bulletg* I also thought it was a great beginning to a story. It drew me in right away. Excellent hook.


*Cupcakev* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I have no suggestions. I have no doubt you have a good chance with this piece. *Wink*


*Cupcakev* Final Thoughts

         I'm a little rusty with reviewing as I've been on a two-month vacation without my laptop. I'm not very good at typing on my cell phone with my index finger. *Laugh* But anyway, this is a wonderful entry! Best of luck. *Heart*

*SuitHeart* A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Open in new Window.*SuitHeart*
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Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby *Cupcakev*


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