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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
More poems for Promptly Poetry, stuffed into this book because I have reached my limit.
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Spring Dreams - week 31" Open in new Window.
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Greetings, Ned!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Dreams... They're so peculiar, aren't they? Sometimes we're the main character, sometimes we're a bystander, and sometimes we think it's all happened before when it never did at all...

I love how you've taken the prompt and made something quite relatable and "sensible" out of it. The image details, of a lady dancing with an umbrella and raincoat when it hardly looks like it's even raining are definitely dreamlike.

Your rhyme scheme is balanced and whimsical, bringing a humorous touch to the lighthearted spring scene.

My one suggestion (as per Bear Fund recommendations) is that you might want to balance the plural and say "splishes" as well as "sploshes." Other than that, a charming spring poem.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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