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Fifth go around on Promptly Poetry Challenge
by Bunny Sox Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Mysteries of the Night" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sox!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Whee! This was a hilarious and perfectly suitable use of the prompt: all those weird, inconsequential yet totally nerve-wracking questions that keep us staring up at the ceiling in the dead of night... "Did I turn off the TV? *TV* Did hubby remember to fill the tank on his way home? Is that a leaky faucet I hear, or maybe a ghost? *Ghost* Did the toilet just flush all by itself?!" *Shock2* *Dropb*

As far as suggestions... Did you have to resist the urge to spell it "Sox" when wondering what the dryer does with them? Because it's written in the singular. Other than that, well done! Hey, since you made me laugh, you should try entering this in Lornda's "The Humorous Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. *Delight*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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