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Promptly 4 and 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
Poems for years 4 and 5 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Mysteries of the Night" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Glad you're back and doing your best to hang out with us again *Hug1**Smile**Hug2* We're all just rolling along as usual. I've got a gazillion things I want to do this month: so little time *Mindblown*

This is a creative take on the prompt, showing us something spooky and relatable without getting all "psycho metaphysical" like mine often do. You've painted the scene carefully, bringing a moment clearly and humorously to light and marveling at the oddities of nature. Someday I too will hear the midnight call of a fox... *Fox*

There's nothing here I can think of suggesting to change. You do so well with poetry, especially free verse. Remember, every word counts. I remember getting the invaluable tip from our friend BKC of striving to eliminate articles from my creations. This of course depends greatly on what type of poem one is making; it lends mine a nicely dreamlike and concentrated atmosphere. If your poem needs definitive concrete "the," "and," and "a," certainly this is not a hard and fast rule. But it's a useful word painting tip.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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