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What do you see when you look in your mirror?
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem debates good vs evil and how it wars within ourselves.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the expression. It's not accusatory or demanding, but asks sincere, legitimate questions that only we can answer.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a rhyming poem with 3 stanzas and an AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "As she sits upon the water, gazing, she begins to ponder," It's an easy visual, but it implies more with the invitation to ponder, suggesting it's easy to get lost in weighty thoughts.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening piques the reader's interest and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem and invites the reader to go a little deeper. Easy expression that invites introspection.

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