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 DO NOT EAT THE ICE-CREAM Open in new Window. [E]
The Historical Museum of Great Minds does not provide spoons in any kind of visit or tour.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, and welcome to writing.com!

I found this using the Random Read and Review button, and boy, what a rollicking ride. It reads like a snapshot from a comedic cartoon kids movie, with talking animals, futuristic elements, and quick quips and sneaky tricks. I'd love to see a wider context here, but as a vignette, this was excellent.

In fact, it reminds me of a postmodern parody of a Felix the Cat skit from the olden days. Perhaps you had that in mind? Or is it a simple fable of outsmarting in the digital age?

I noticed you use > to represent an indent for your lines of dialogue. There are different ways to align item text here on WdC; I like using single spaces between each paragraph, but others prefer one block of text and using {indent} at each paragraph break to offset them.

Which brings me to your use of our proprietary markup language, which can be found in the Writing ML Docs and Help in the left sidebar. You can use this to increase your font to Size 4 Verdana, which is the best for an easy and engaging reading experience.

A word count in the subtitle would be a good idea to let us know what we're in for.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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