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 | The Caregiver  [E] Care-giving carries little public acclaim but its significance is undeniable  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Hello, Jacqui, aka jlanis! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:  I enjoyed reading your "The Caregiver" poem today. Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:  Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. I found your poem in the "Anniversary Reviews" forum today, reviewed by someone else that I respect. I have a deep appreciation for caregivers, so your "The Caregiver" poem's title drew me in and I clicked and read your poem and enjoyed it greatly, so I decided to give you a review as a little anniversary gift. Happiest anniversary wishes to you and best wishes on your writing future too! Your poem is a lovely tribute to caregivers. I found it to be concise, beautiful, and inspiring to read. I thought the free-verse style worked well with the message of your poem. My favorite line was the "I bring light to the darkness" line.  I thought it was both a lovely use of imagery and application of the concept! I wondered if this was written for a special someone or in response to a contest or challenge prompt here? I wondered if you really are a caregiver, and figuring it was likely, prayed for extra strength, insight, and encouragement for you. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "The Caregiver" poem. I thought the inspirational, community, and tribute genres you selected for this poem were appropriate matches for it.IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have some little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section. Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!  It's always nice for me as a reader to have the poetry form and line count listed below the poem, perhaps in a "notes" section. I don't know how long it took me to start doing that, but once I did, readers responded favorably. So I'd recommend adding that information beneath your poem. It might help you get more future readers if you added a thumbnail picture to your story, if your membership level allows that. Pictures are attention getting and could help your story stand out in a list of search results.As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION:  I enjoyed reading your , and empathized with your sentiments that you expressed in it. It also inspired me to both pray for you and for all caregivers around the world. May the Lord bless you all with extra strength, insight, encouragement, and everything you need to thrive. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance during your anniversary month, and always! PWheeler   A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review!   Positive Hearts  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"  The B.E.A.R. Fund   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/05/2025 @ 11:42pm EDT