Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. A man is trying to tell a story to some children, only for a woman to basically say, "It's bedtime," and try to get the children to sleep. It seems that there is some sort of secret, where demons and fairies are concerned. Makes one wonder what is up.

Characters
Characters look interesting. I wonder if there is more to the tale.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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