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Greetings, Dee, and welcome to writing.com!

This is such a nice anecdote, like reading an article in a feel-good magazine. I enjoyed the warm, conversational tone and the educational FAQs at the end. I’m happy to meet you here, and I hope you’re enjoying your time with us. I love how you use pictures to brighten up your portfolio and the items therein. It helps you stand out from the average newbie.

The thought of coming across an actual active bees nest in the wild makes me nervous… though I grew up on an acre of land with nature galore, and my mom and I were avid gardeners, I never really discovered where the bees nested. Which is probably a good thing *Laugh* *Yikes* *Bee* One time I was stung by a yellow jacket when I went too close to their underground nest, which they had moved into after our neighbor killed off a mole family because they were messing with his lawn… oh the sensitive balance of our natural environment!

My main suggestions for this item relate mainly to the way it looks on here. You should learn to use our proprietary markup language (WritingML). Basic help for the use of it can be found here https://www.writing.com/main/tools/action/writingml or on the left sidebar under WdC Tools. I always recommend using Size 4 Verdana font to create an open and engaging reading experience for all ages and abilities. A word count at the top or subtitle of the item is a good idea to help us know what we’re getting into.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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