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The Fellowship Of The Wing Open in new Window. [13+]
A short parody of the Lord of the Rings
by W.D.Wilcox Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Ah, the perfect story to read while eating greasy chicken wings. Young Ono Saggins has been chosen to carry the One Wing to its destination, only he feels compelled to eat it. However, trouble will befall him, and others, the moment that he takes a bite. Dangerous ones are after him, and the Wing. Will he be able to survive, or will he be fried?

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Characters look interesting.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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