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Greetings, Sonali!

I'm here for I Write 2025.

As always, a bright and cheerful entry, this time featuring curious kids and sneaky teachers. It's such fun to read your work. This is a creative spin on the offered prompt... At first I assumed the club was full of kids, and as it unfolded it became quite amusing.

I'm reminded of all manner of tropes and premises... Have you ever heard of the "detective gone mad" trope, where the detective appears to be breaking the law when he's really doing something good for society? It can be quite funny when done lightheartedly.

So, if you ever want to come back to this story, you could amp up the sinister aspect and make it be something quite suspicious and tense. I guess that's all I have to suggest *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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