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 Disposing of refrigeration units  Open in new Window. [13+]
A poem about disappointment or sadness that reads strangely cheerful or upbeat
by 💙 Carly: poems & novel Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
A poem about how to get rid of your refrigerator the right way.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Great advice! It's well said and very succinct. Honestly, it's got to a be a challenge writing about getting rid of a refrigerator so this is pretty good.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There is no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Neglecting to do such a step, Has resulted in several deaths" This is a honest, in-your-face, what's going to happen and it evokes negative emotions so you better think twice before leaving your frig on the curb.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening interest the reader. The title fits the poem well. Honest and straight forward. It's not easy coming up with a poem about this topic, so well done!

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