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Review #4805387
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Toe in the Water Open in new Window. [13+]
A tentative blog to test the temperature.
by Beholden Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "QuotationsOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, Beholden!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

*Bulletg* I enjoyed reading your "Quotations" blog post today.

*Bulletg* Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* I found your blog post in my news feed. I clicked it, read it, and enjoyed it. Because the Writing.Com SuperPower Reviewers have a raid going today, I figured I'd give you a review too.

*Bulleto* You brought up an excellent point. A lot of times, quotes are taken out of context. If one has the time, it's worth investigating Also worth considering is that they are sometimes mis-attributed too. Most of the time, if I'm posting a quote, it's to encourage or inspire people. I don't usually take the time to investigate the source, though when I do have time, I try to make sure the right person is given credit at least.

*Bulleto* I thought your writing style was personable (as usual), and easy to read and follow.

*Bulleto* I appreciated that you were concise and humble.

*Bulleto* I don't think I've seen the "Slings and Arrows" show, but I probably haven't seen 99 percent (or more...) of what's popular on television.

*Bulleto* Your watercolor image in the thumbnail picture was perfect for the title of your overall blog, of which this post is a part.

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post.

*Bulleto* I thought the experience and personal genres you selected for this blog post were appropriate matches for it.

*Bulleto* I liked that you included your word count below your post.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you! *Clap*

*Bulletb* The best thing I can think of to improve this post would be to include a quote that you like and have taken the time to investigate. Leading a post about quotes with a quote seems like a nice idea to me.

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:

*Bulletv* I enjoyed reading your blog post about quotations, and agreed with your ideas that you expressed in it.

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance this month, and always!

PWheeler




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