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Greetings, Sonali!

I'm here once more as a fellow member of I Write in 2025.

I love how you've taken your personal disaster and found something wonderful because of it. Listening to someone telling a story is a very comforting thing, and it must be a real blessing to you with your now limited vision.

The prompt has been met well, with something which could have been a crushing tragedy unfolding into the wonders of a new way to experience literature.

My biggest concern with audiobooks is patience... I know they're many hours long, and I know I can read much faster than I can hear. Also, I'm fussy about voices and tones and personalities. But maybe someday I'll have a need to explore this option.

The hardest part of the Bear Fund is finding something to correct... With a deeply personal and positive and free verse poem like this, nicely formatted and easy to read, I can't think of anything to suggest. Perhaps gathering the "fine print" at the bottom rather than the top would lead to a tidier appearance.

Well done, and I'm happy for you!

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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