Hello, I am affiliated with more than one review group. However, I am here to answer the prompt in "Space Blog" .

I didn't notice any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors. There is a lot of emotion and meaning packed into this 55-word story. It's a sad story with a sad ending. It is short, bittersweet and to the point. I have no suggestions for improvement. The picture and the title give all the information needed to bring in a potential reader. It would make an interesting beginning of a novel.

Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future,



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .