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Review #4803689
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 Weekly Poetry Challenge Five Open in new Window. [13+]
where I will store my weekly poetry challenge poems plus a few other related poems
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Week 30 Korean Springtime " Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, sir!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Ah, spring! All around the world, it has a universal appeal, bringing love to hearts and minds as the weather becomes warmer and more conducive to raising families. It’s built into our natures.

I like how you’ve given us a glimpse into spring in Korea, showing us the similarities and differences to create a poem more unique and less trite than the prompt would seem to offer. You even thought of adding some of the native language and an ominous touch of Chinese dust…

You always use splendid large font and lots of space between lines, creating an easy reading experience for everyone. I noticed your book of poetry has generic genres. I would suggest labeling it with more relevant genres to make it easier to find in case someone’s looking for a book of poetry. You could use “Philosophy,” “Drama,” and “Emotional,” or “Nature,” or “Political ,” or”Inspirational,” or “Experience,” or “Personal,” or most other genres would suit.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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