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Promptly 4 and 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
Poems for years 4 and 5 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
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Greetings, Beholden!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Ah, the interface between poetry and song; it's a subject I've given much thought to over the years. You've used a simple consideration as the framework of your poem: music is poetry, trained and directed specifically to be heard aloud.

I must point out you miscalculated the fourth line of this form: you need four words there, not three. I formed mine in a strictly diamond shaped structure, taking the time to measure out syllables, though it wasn't required. Also, your last four lines all rhyme the same, which isn't exactly what the form required.

An interesting thought which seems to struggle a bit to fit into the form given. I always enjoy seeing how everyone approaches the prompts, and yours are always careful and enlightening.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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