Greetings my Surprising poet 'jcosmos':

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
I was totally seduced by the minimalist, raw edge I felt from the language! I appreciate, in my observation- I beg you to entertain, how the crude boiled down language has reached its complete and sincere essence. Words, but sharp weapons at the same time.


Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):
I always am a believer in the possibility of your piece benefiting from this!!

Artistic Voice and Imagery:
In my mind, Voice was clear, loud and precise.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

A++
Suggestions:

Humbly I might dare to suggest you explore subtle ways to tighten the pure gold you have already refined, with rhythm, or rhyme; something of the sort...

SKÖL!!
Hrafnar Árgeir

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