First, Happy WDC anniversary, and wishing you many more.

This was a hilarious story, and I enjoyed it immensely. My only real problem is the last two sentences of the first paragraph. I know you’re trying to convey the fact that your relatives, once they learned you wanted to become a doctor, started hitting you up for free medical advice. But the way you phrased it was awkward. It took me a couple of readings to realize what you were trying to say. Perhaps you might consider stating it like this:

I was hesitant to attend. Ever since my family found out I was planning to become a medical professional, they started talking to me about their ailments. It was as if I had already completed medical school and was waiting to pass my certification boards.

Anyway, funny story. Thanks for sharing!


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