Hi, I found this while browsing the newbie section. I'd like to take a moment to extend to you my warmest welcome. I'm assuming this was for "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  is that right?

Either way, I enjoy a good flash fiction, it's difficult to put a story into words with only 300 to work with, but I must say you don't miss a beat. Your imagery is spot on, and active almost through the whole thing.

I like your little subtle clues as to what is going on in this story, not handed out on a platter, but enough to give a reader a good "fill in the blank."

It entices the imagination with colorful language and as such, I think it's worthy of praise. Well done!

I hope to see more of your flash fictions, you're pretty good at this!

Thanks for sharing, and again, welcome to writing.com.

You responded to this review 02/28/2025 @ 10:21am EST

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