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Positives
I really enjoyed this poem. I thought it was particularly elegant in its simplicity while also communicating a whole lot of emotion and meaning. The structure of the haiku was flawless, as far as I can tell... although I'm by no means an expert on poetry!
Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
Overall, I really enjoyed this poem. Nice work!
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