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Amilcar's Birthday Party Open in new Window. [E]
Amilcar explains about birthdays.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

I found this using the Random Read and Review button.

Ahh, what a comforting philosophy. It's always a pleasure to read a story from you, and I really appreciated this one. As someone who prefers solitude and peace, I find myself wishing I could have Amilcar's simple, quiet life of being a happy hermit. You've given him enlightenment and helped him share it with others, and it's an excellent little story.

One suggestion, which I have no idea if you've already done or not because I found this on mobile: Size 4 Verdana font. Aside from that, I think you should drop this off at Kit's Senior Center Forum for the opportunity to be awarded a ribbon. It deserves one.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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