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Christmas - The Gift! Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about the greatest gift of all!
by Jaiam Author Icon
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Review by Sung'manitu Author IconMail Icon
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First, let me wish you a happy WDC anniversary, and many more to come.

As to your poem, I love how it starts off with the meaning of Christmas being lost in the glitter. It sums up the overcommercialization of Christmas in a single line.

I have to say, I wasn’t sure what to think of you not pairing lines six and eight with the rhyming scheme, but instead paring lines six and ten. But after reading it out loud a few times, I found it worked beautifully. All in all, a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing!
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