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 Ghostly Whispers in the Night & Wistful Open in new Window. [E]
the ghost in the castle and the lady Isabella, the specters were reunited and laid peace.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

This is a good intro for your book on Amazon. The teaser immediately captures interest and gets the reader's attention piqued.


Suggestions

You might want to consider adding some additional elements to this Static Item to draw attention to your book. For example, maybe a picture of the cover, or some excerpts from favorable reviews, or other information to entice visitors to check your work out.


Overall

Overall, this was a solid sales pitch for your book. There's a little room for improvement, but you're off to a great start. Nice work!


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