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Review of Metamorphosis  Open in new Window.
Review by Hrafnar Árgeir Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

The unsettling though very poignant language are very effective in illustrating the changes!

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):
The varying line lengths and strategic use of ellipses, effectively delivers us as readers the stages of transformation.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:

Your voice definitely shines through your imagery that's really good.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
A+

Suggestions:

Incorporate a bit more sensory details immerse the reader maybe..



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Hrafnar Árgeir









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