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Given: Feb 22, 2025 at 4:12pm
Length: 730 Characters |
707 w/o WritingML
Ah Legos - brings out the kid in one. In this story, we have some dastardly villains working to rob a museum and steal all those precious, priceless, historical, and valuable, artifacts, all while the place is about to be open in Lego City. Will their nasty deed succeed, or with those brave police officers foil their wicked actions? One must read to find out.
Characters
The characters sound interesting. I wonder what will happen.
Spelling and Grammar
I'll be honest - you got some unnecessary capitalizations, at least one duplicated sentence, and "Prophets" should be "Profits".
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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