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 Somewhere In Time Open in new Window. [ASR]
An elder man talks to his deceased friend about the research he had kept hidden from him.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed reading this piece. I thought it was well-written and you managed to fit a lot of information and detail in a relatively short piece. I thought the dialogue at the end moved the story along nicely to an effective end.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this. Nice work!


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