I am associated with more than one review group. I am reviewing your item primarily because it is part of the Space Blog prompt for today.

Sometimes as a leader/mentor, it is hard to find time alone. I think we all need solitude every now and then to give ourselves time to reflect, regroup, recharge, and heal. I am impressed the story's character was able to wait twelve years before moving to another location. I can certainly understand his frustration. It was easy for me to relate to him.

I did not notice any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors. I know some people would prefer you spell out the numbers for the age. For a short story, it expresses quite a bit of information.

Overall, it was a simple and enjoyable read. I do always encourage adding a photo to help draw attention to the item. The description is what originally caught my attention and drew me in. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your writing.



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