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Siam goes Home. In the process of being written, Please be patient.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed this story. I thought you did a great job capturing a lot of information and detail in comparatively few words, and the dialogue effectively moved the story alone.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought this was a solid nice. Nice work!


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