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Greetings, Sonali!

I'm here for I Write 2025.

I love how bright and positive your items always are; it's a joy to read them.

This poem takes inspiration from the prompt and makes it into something lovely: a warm reminder of the importance of good education and teachers who take their job seriously.

Rather than simply feeding the kids facts and figures, the outstanding teachers engage their pupils' minds and help them think for themselves about life's big issues.

I love the sentiments here. My only suggestion might be to take a closer look at your syllable counts and perhaps try to maintain a steady "beat" throughout, as the flow seems a bit choppy. I used to eschew counting syllables and measuring meter, but I've learned it makes a big difference in ease of reading and general appearances.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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