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 Unrest  Open in new Window. [E]
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Review of Unrest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A man with a mysterious past, and a mythical beast, decides to spend some time in a backwater town, well away from those who might know of him. However, something seems to bother him more than usual, even as he tries to enjoy the town's local festival, even annoying the local Duke. What dark secret does he hold that makes him worry with fear for the local farmers and miners?

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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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