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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

This was a charming story that you did a great job setting up and paying off. I like the fact that you detailed the importance of a sense of humor to defuse situations at the beginning of the story and then brought it around and paid it off at the end of the story. In such a short piece, that's not easy to do. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a light, enjoyable story. Well done!


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