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 A warning or a death sentence Open in new Window. [13+]
If lying could save someone's life or your own, lie!
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this story. The 300-word flash fiction stories featuring a prompt of multiple keywords that have to be used can be a real challenge sometimes, and I thought you did well incorporating them into the narrative.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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