Hello, Intuey!
INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Escape" poem this evening.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.
MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I found your poem in the "Anniversary Reviews" forum today, reviewed by someone else that I respect. I tend to love your poetry so when I saw the five star rating the other person gave you, and your user name, I was intrigued. Then I saw the title and thought that the desire to escape sometimes is universal, so your title drew me in and I clicked and read your poem and enjoyed it greatly, so I decided to give you a review as a little anniversary gift. Happiest anniversary wishes to you and best wishes on your writing future too!

Your poem was dark and dramatic and filled with action. I felt my heart rate speed up as I read it.

I thought the free verse format worked well with the message of your poem.

My favorite line was the last one as it was unexpected and yet rang true. I thought it was a great way to conclude your "Escape" poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Escape" poem.

I appreciated that you included both your line and word count. I almost never include a word count for poetry (unless the contest or challenge requires it), but it was interesting to note.

I thought the dark, drama, and psychology genres you selected for this poem were appropriate matches for it.

I liked both the thumbnail picture and the larger picture you featured with this poem, just above it. The larger one, especially, felt like a perfect match for it.
IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have two little suggestions to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.
Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

I wondered if this poem was written for a particular contest or challenge here? If you didn't enter it in Rachel's "Shadows and Light" contest yet, I'd recommend that you do. I think it'd be a contender there.

If you did enter this in a contest or challenge here and you happen to remember the name of the contest or challenge that you entered this poem in, I'd recommend adding it. It's interesting to know, at least to me, what the contest or challenge was, if there is one.
As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.
CONCLUSION:

I enjoyed reading your "A Note of Thanks" poem, and empathized with your sentiments that you expressed in it.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!
May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance during your anniversary month, and always!
PWheeler
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