This was an entertaining, engaging vignette that captures the spark of a moment between two people. I like the simplicity of the piece, and the directness with which it was presented.

I was hoping for a bit more in the way of character development, to help the reader understand what it is about Ed and Samuel's connection that is so captivating that it would make them consider a spontaneous trip to London. I think it bit more development of the characters would help make the appeal of the situation even greater.

Overall, I think you're off to a great start with this piece. Well done!