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Review #4800376
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Wheel of Fortune Open in new Window. [18+]
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

I love this highly educational and wonderfully written poem. A quick glance at the Wikipedia page for "mudflats" reveals a highly complex living ecosystem, a marvel of the natural world.

You've captured some of that feeling here in poetry, with good use of vocabulary to create a word picture and a humorous touch as you run into a fellow mud-lover. The use of the tarot card for inspiration is creative, adding thoughtful depth.

If anything, I would recommend making it a bit longer. Perhaps a glimpse of a particular species of bird, or a rare flower, even an otter or two playing - I love otters! 🦦 You can engage the senses of smell and sight and even the taste of salt wind.

Other than that, I highly recommend submitting this to Shadows and Light as Kare said. Best of luck there!

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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