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 | Ambition's Lure: A Cautionary Tale"  [E] A poem of a person touching the sun.  |
| (4.0)  Happy Writing.com Account Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Hi Louis Lovelock Congratulations on your account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.  Positives I thought you did a really great job with this poem. The visual language is excellent, and your imagery paints a vibrant image for the reader. I thought the internal structure of the lines was good as well. Suggestions Personally, I would love to have a little white space / line separation to break the poem up a little and give the reader a visual break on the page, but that's a relatively small quibble with an otherwise excellent poem. Overall Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another Writing.com author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy"    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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