Hello, Intuey!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed visiting and re-reading your "Give A Gift" fundraising activity this evening.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end on my first visit and again today (though I admit, on in between visits, I just scanned for what I needed ).



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I love this "Give A Gift" fundraising activity of yours and have used it multiple times, but never had time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "February" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I loved your "Give A Gift" fundraising activity so much! You have a great variety and selection of offerings at reasonable prices. There's something for everyone!

I thought your instructions were clear and easy to understand and follow. I've successfully made purchases for myself and others and have gotten good feedback from my giftees.

Your fundraiser page's design is nice and there's lots of color and white space so it's easy on the eyes and pleasing to look at.

Your custom merit badges and awardicons make this "Give A Gift" fundraising activity extra special, in my opinion.

My very favorite of your custom badges is your "Lucky Dog" badge, although I love them all. You have great taste and design ideas!

I liked that you included a section to keep track of badges waiting for community recognition. It's so nice that we only have to wait a week now.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Give A Gift" fundraising activity.

I appreciated that you included information on the challenge, even though I'm in it with you, and that you reminded me what the prompt was that week and even linked to it.

I thought the activity and community genres you selected for this "Give A Gift" fundraising activity were perfectly appropriate matches for it.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

The "other" genre isn't likely to net you more future visitors or readers, as I don't think anyone searches for that. I'd recommend choosing a different genre, as people do search by genre here. Perhaps "friendship," "cultural," "writing.com," "personal," or "experience might be nice options to consider? There's a drop down list, as you know, because you had to use it to select other. I don't have it memorized; those are just some suggestions. The actual list will probably be more helpful.

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:

I enjoyed revisiting your "Give A Gift" fundraising activity this evening, and I might just place another order soon.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, merit badges, awardicons, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance during your anniversary month, and always!

PWheeler











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