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Poetically Prompted Open in new Window. [E]
Fifth go around on Promptly Poetry Challenge
by St. Patrick's Sox Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Unicorn" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sox!

I'm here again as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

This is totally "aww;" what could be cuter than the last unicorn and a misfit lady finding each other? There's room here for a lovely fairytale or fantasy story, or at least some charming AI images. So far I only have one, no, two unicorn stories in my port; perhaps you've inspired me to write more.

Your rhyme scheme is balanced, if perhaps a little strained. Perhaps something like this would "paint" better in free verse, but I like the childlike aspect of what you have, and you know I avoid picking away at anyone's poetry—even my own.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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