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 "Paradise Missing" Open in new Window. [E]
This is a story I wrote for a challenge on a different site a while back.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. You have a man writing a letter to his wife, talking about how it seems that the plan to turn another planet habitable seems to not be working, as Earth grass won't grow on it. Thus, he plans on returning back to Earth, asking his family to start making plans. The last line makes one wonder.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but using regular Text Size, or even a regular font style, will make reading easier, along with having space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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