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Birthday Bash Relay. Excited on Second Place! Now for various WDC contests and activities
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sonali!

I’m riding a wave of inspiration! I hope Annette doesn’t mind us hogging I Write 2025 *Shock2*

How do you make everything look so easy? I struggle with those Elevator Pitches like *Crazy* This was so fun to read, and it nailed all the requirements to set the groundwork for a rollicking rom-com. In fact, the cute critters would make for a great movie visual.

One thing making this concept harder for me is that I don’t know how to go about setting it up… do I write out the whole thing from beginning to end, like an extremely brief Wikipedia plotline? Or do I leave a cliffhanger like the back of a dust jacket? Is it a complete story? No, it’s supposed to make us want more, to find out what happens in the end.

So, with that in mind, I might suggest thinking about writing yours in such a way as to leave off the most important part, the climax, to give us more of a “proposal” feel and less of a “summarization” feel, if you know what I mean. Another thing I struggle with is storytelling that’s too “easy,” without any “drama.” If it doesn’t have gangsters or a showdown, it’s either a sweet children’s story or something that bores me to death as I’m writing it *Rolling* I’m not saying yours is boring at all, rather marveling at how good you are at incorporating your prompts into something fun and engaging and perfectly logical (for the most part *Wink*)

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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